yea, this is really rough
carls character
He as a german citizen whos around 20. He is new in the German army . All he has back home is his family. Most of his friends joined the army as well. He is nameless for now. he'll probably hate the French who he is fighting against on the western front.
Brians character, Thoman rosenberry, blue eyes, 28, 5'9 190lbs, thomas rosenberry is a squadleader, he discovers the two main characters in the ditch together and quickly executes the german soldier, he is notoreously known for his bad hygene. at the age of 7 His family was killed by bandits, his home was destroyed and he has nothing left to go back to.
davids
Characters: The characters we choose are two young men in the midst of the first world war. These two have never met before and they are serving for opposite armies in this war. Both soldiers are fairly good soldiers but, they truly have no desire to fight and want nothing more but to go home.Conflict: The conflict in this scene is about how both soldiers are trapped under a tank in a ditch. The tank somehow flipped over and fell over them. Now that they are stuck under the tank they come to find out that they are both out of ammunition to kill each other with. The object of war is to kill the people from the opposing side but that can't happen if you become friends with someone from the other side; which is what happens to these two. Another conflict arises when the tank is removed from over their heads and a squad of one of the soldiers that was trapped is at the top of the ditch....Relationship: The two characters have no prior relationship prior to this scene and this is the scene in which they build a relationship and eventually become friends.Setting: This scene takes place on a battle field, but primarily in a ditch under a destroyed tank. It is dark but not completely; just enough for the two characters to make out each other.
2 comments:
alright carl, we think that your character is very rough still (as you mentioned), the background doesn't really talk much about him, therefore we think that he has the potential to be a good character, but with more work on it...
about brian's character... we think that height and weight and eye coolor is important at all, we also believe that the name sounds more like a british than like a German, therefore we could propose names such as Hans, Kurt, etc. His bio is also very vague
Good words.
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